What do you think about our environment considering the fact that there has been steady increase in pollution and affects like global warming are increasing as time is passing by? Are we under jeopardy? Is the humanity safe?
Environment around us constitutes of those factors, which influence on survival living beings like human, flora and fauna. If an imbalance occurs in those factors, our existence is threatened. Nowadays, pollution is increasing day by day, because of it have many affects like raised global warming, so that man under the jeopardy. I will discuss this topic in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, people have to face many disease due to raise level of pollution, like breathing problems and cardiovascular diseases. Moreover, people cannot pay proper attention towards the study and their working because of the pollution, which effects on the development in any field.
Apart from this, sea level has increased due to global warming, which make cause of floods and it also effects on coastal regions and those will demolished. Besides this, more pollution also increase the level of temperature,due to which the existence of the human can be vanished from the earth. After that, sun create dangerous radiations, which influence on the human body
In conclusion, it can be said that pollution is the biggest problem for people, but it can be solved by some ways, likewise people should grow more and more trees and they use less use of vehicles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'consists of'?
Suggestion: consists of
Environment around us constitutes of those factors, which influence on survi...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'demolish'
Suggestion: demolish
...fects on coastal regions and those will demolished. Besides this, more pollution also incr...
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Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , due
...n also increase the level of temperature,due to which the existence of the human can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, likewise, moreover, so, apart from, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 204.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12254901961 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70912618153 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3964270058 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.111111111 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 7.25397266985 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144097069918 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593762053513 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562106473769 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789772099177 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667267331718 0.0609392437508 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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