“Normal” societal roles for women include taking care of the children in the household. But now that women contribute equally in outdoor responsibilities, it would be a little unfair to expect the same amount of dedication towards the upbringing of the children.
Is it okay for men to participate and share the responsibilities of the house and make their presence be felt more in their children's life, or should the mothers be solely responsible?
The sustainable influence of women equally contribute in outdoor activities as men, due to which she cannot proper dedication towards the offsprings. Therefore, males should also participate in household responsibilities, or should mothers are responsible for this. I will discuss thisa topic in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, men should also help the women in household activities, due to which helps in proper take care of their offsprings and couples will not have to face houshold conflicts. Moreover, this proposal can also save their money, because some families keep the servants in the homes for doing household works, due to which they cannot hide their personal secrets, it also stimulate the crimes.
Apart from this, when women will have to do both jobs like household works and outdoor activities, then they cannot cannot do someone work propely due to which they cannot spend time with their family. Furthermore, women will have to face some health problems due to lots of burden of work and they may have not properly take care towards the children health and their own health.
In conclusion, it can be said that one dictum is famous from long time any vehicle cannot run on the single wheel, in the same way, single partner cannot properly manage the house, so that both husband and wife should contribute in all household works, it is very beneficial for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 377, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stimulates'?
Suggestion: stimulates
...ot hide their personal secrets, it also stimulate the crimes. Apart from this, when wome...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: cannot
...works and outdoor activities, then they cannot cannot do someone work propely due to which th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, apart from, in conclusion, to begin with, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 6.10837438424 295% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04347826087 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57072364089 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578260869565 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.16085865 50.4703680194 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.0 104.977214359 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 20.9669160288 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.125 7.25397266985 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162584807714 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778700418821 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511088486795 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106710137351 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396100285675 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.1260098522 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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