What do yuopu think the most invention for the past 100 years.' Antibiotic, airplane, Computer? And why?
The important of most important intervention for the past 100 years was computers which was always debatable has now become more controversal. The substantial influence of computers was the most popular intervention has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of these trend in recent year. It can be agreed that computers play a vital role in our daily life. It makes our life easier.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why computer is most essential intervention but the most conspicious on stem's from the fact that computer minimize the work. As an illustration, computers helps to develop the science and technology for example, A science students in nepal make a remote control aeroplane. In addition, computers save time and reduce work time. Thus, computers is most important intervention which helpful in all sector like education, movie, games, songs etc.
Nevertheless, there remain same drawbacks which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of computers is important intervention but the most alaraming one is rooted in the fact that people will be more depend on computers. For instance computer may affect in human health like more computers users have a eye problem. Moreover, computers may decrease social live meetings. Therefore, computer intervention will create some situtional problems.
From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that the impact of more computers production is good nowdays is prominent, although the way computers decrease the human worker less value. More computer production may lead the finincial cricis in a poor family. Excessive use of computers may cause a stress should be well handled.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecrease social live meetings. Therefore, computer intervention will create some s...
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Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'computers'' or 'computer's'?
Suggestion: computers'; computer's
...an be concluded that the impact of more computers production is good nowdays is prominent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39543726236 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87100192531 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589353612167 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.1720211292 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204216405878 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712514937942 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436933249474 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129085483245 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269056365752 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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