The world is becoming a smaller place because of globalization. Some people dread that culture will inevitably disappear as a result. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Globalization is the process of interaction and integration of people, organization and government. There is ongoing debate that due to globalization culture will diminish. In this essay, I shall provide my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.
There are several reasons why globalization affects culture and why it is in danger? One of them is that in this era of quick transportation tourism is quite easy. When people from one region come to meet with other region, they will adapt changes and learn other's culture. Hence, it is possible that they forget about their own culture and adapt other culture. Though, the change is good for human beings but some people take it as a threat to the culture.
Those people who argue that globalization will not inevitably disappear the culture has different point of view and say that it is actually a good thing. People from different origin mix together and talked about their culture and habits. They share various ideas, while discussing on these things, the importance of culture will be reflected. Without the discussion, they take the culture for granted.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case my personal view is that in this era of quick transportation and telecommunication all the world is now a global village. So, from the globalization people will learn from each other. Hence, culture will be identified and tagged with them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02521008403 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81043130418 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53781512605 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8211314044 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7333333333 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8666666667 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 7.25397266985 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154276334396 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553270499568 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419920287784 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965773388291 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431588184367 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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