It is unquestionable fact that world is coming closer as globalization is on rise. One section feels that local cultures will vanish as a result of globalization. In my opinion, globalization helps in learning new cultures and adapting to them and also keeping their old culture intact.
Learning new culture is a good sign for people moving to different places. Many people are moving to different countries in search of jobs. As they settle in new places, they need to learn the local culture to be comfortable in the place they live in. For example, most of the young generation in India are moving towards west in search for jobs. As they settle in new places, they learn table manners, respecting people, obeying laws strictly which is otherwise not followed much in their own place. This helps people learning good things from others cultures which aren't present in their own culture.
Additionally, some of the universities have student exchange program where students from different countries swap their places in universities for a year. This helps students to learn new things about the country and also have a different exposure. This kind of programs help students to have a good foundation as they might be exposed to international arena later.
In my opinion, globalization is having a good impact in people lives where people from different race can learn about different cultures. Dilution of culture is very minimal and the benefits outweigh the bad impacts on culture due to globalization.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to table'
Suggestion: to table
...s they settle in new places, they learn table manners, respecting people, obeying law...
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Line 3, column 568, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
... good things from others cultures which arent present in their own culture. Addit...
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Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...in their own culture. Additionally, some of the universities have student exchange prog...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, kind of, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10040160643 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7887568708 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5140562249 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1654980759 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.7142857143 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126934034637 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538705784101 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456205077385 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885394077872 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439614435521 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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