Write a essay to recommend your agency with
- Text type: website
- Style: neutral
- Purpose: to promote the company
-Structure: separate sections of text
- Reader: possible customer
About us
We are a professional gym club with 10 years’ experience and have 52 braches all over the country. We have many kind of different classes which people can choose. Health is absolutely important to people. Therefore, we will help you improve your body and have a good health. We will offer different training packages for you to refer.
What we do
The sale team will recommend extremely preferential prices for you. When you register, we have inbody text to know your body index. At the same time, personal trainers come up with appropriate diets and guide for you to practice effectively and properly. You can follow the exercise schedule to join classes as aerobic, dance, cardio,… We will provide free towels and drinks for the session. Various sauna system can relax you after class. Personal trainers will stretch out when you feel tired.
Testimonials
‘ Win fitness and yoga! helped me to lose weight and have a nice body. Everything is perfect from machinery to staff.’ Anna, Ha Noi. ‘ I have been a member of this club 2 years. I used to drink too much alcohol. Thanks to the club that helped me understand my health and take care myself. Now J have a good health and quit drinking’ Josh Nguyen, Ho Chi Minh.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 108, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...2 braches all over the country. We have many kind of different classes which people can c...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 334, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...o join classes as aerobic, dance, cardio,… We will provide free towels and drinks ...
^^
Line 6, column 25, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Helped
... Testimonials ‘ Win fitness and yoga! helped me to lose weight and have a nice body....
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 31.9359605911 63% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 1207.87684729 85% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7465437788 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51476136425 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672811059908 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 379.143842365 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.5024630542 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7111897002 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.5882352941 104.977214359 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.7647058824 20.9669160288 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.52941176471 7.25397266985 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0399767672088 0.242375264174 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0132061705127 0.0925447433944 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263435484021 0.071462118173 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.025625646437 0.151781067708 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021075971427 0.0609392437508 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 12.6369458128 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 53.1260098522 143% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.9458128079 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.38 11.5310837438 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.3980295567 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.