The balance between human needs and environmental preservation is a central topic in the contemporary world. As we expand our cities and industries, we must also consider the effects on our natural habitats. With that in mind, here is the question for the discussion board: Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view?
Paul
Hey everyone! I have always believed in a balance. While we can't ignore the importance of farmland, housing, and industry for our survival and economic growth, we should not overlook our duty to protect endangered animals. By preserving their habitats, we are also preserving the balance in our ecosystem.
Mary
Hey folks, I think that it's indeed crucial to maintain a balanced approach here. We do need to take care of our necessities like housing and farming, but at the same time, it's essential to remember that we share this planet with other species. We can't disregard their right to live for our convenience.
I appreciate the points mentioned by both Paul and Mary, and I want to add that it is profoundly crucial to maintain some parts of our environment and landscapes intact for endangered animals. As Paul astutely mentioned, saving green space can lead to a balance in ecosystem, which has a pivotal role not only in animals' but also in human beings' survival. Destroying natural habitats for agricultural or other purposes may lead to the extinction of certain species, and their extinction may cause another extinction. At the long run, it will end up in a chaos in ecosystem which is really detrimental for all living creatures. Consequently, preserving certain landscapes is vital to inhibit the problem of imbalance.
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