119. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave?

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119. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave?

People behave different when they change their clothes. Today, we know that we should make ourselves ready in each situation by changing our appearance. The clothes can define of people's occasion which they are in. They also can imply new and specific mood to individuals.

Clothing and dress themselves are designed to meet different occasions. Now, people realize that they should use specific clothes in each condition. For example, people wear their more official clothes such as tuxedo, when they want to go work, or they look for nice dresses when they are invited to a big party like a marriage celebration. In fact, clothes are clearly defined for various conditions so that we can see persons wear loose clothes for playing sport, comfortable ones like pajama for sleeping, or slack suit at house. Furthermore, if a person breaks this rule, he or she might seem unusual and impolite. Sometimes, people are forced themselves to put on common and definite things just for escaping from the strange looks of people. I remember that in the university, we had a teacher who was dressed in an odd way, a pink T-shirt and a dark blue pants. When he entered the class, the students busted in to the laugh. In the end, he left his way of wearing and accepted to be like other’s teachers with the slacks and blouse. So, people use specific costume in each situation and they are never wearing the same clothes attending different spaces.

People while changing their costumes find themselves in specific mood, too. In fact, our clothes can imply the specific sense and emotion. With some of clothes, we are luxurious and prestigious while, with the other ones, we are casual and simple. For example, my father when want to go out, starts to change his clothes into quite formal jacket and slacks. It is obvious and exiting in my family that he unconsciously treats in another way. In this case, he becomes more strict and serious. As a result, we want to remind ourselves to behave with changing the appearance.

In my opinion, people are dressed based on that defined for the places by the culture of community. They even manner differently after changing the clothing. I myself never run or laugh loudly with the formal dress, however I prefer be active by doing activities while wearing play suit.

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my father when want to go out,
when my father wants to go out,

Sentence: They even manner differently after changing the clothing.
Description: The fragment They even manner is rare

however I prefer be active
however I prefer to be active

People behave different when they change their clothes.
People behave differently when they change their clothes.

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