177- A friend of yours has received some money and plans to use all of it either:•To go on vacation•To buy a car Your friend has asked you for advice. Compare your friend’s two choices and explain which one you think your friend should choose.

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177- A friend of yours has received some money and plans to use all of it either:
• To go on vacation
• To buy a car
Your friend has asked you for advice. Compare your friend’s two choices and explain which one you think your friend should choose.

Although everybody has her own circumstance and condition for making a decision, asking others advice helps a lot. If one of my friends asks me about a choice between buying a car and going a vacation, I will definitely suggest her buying a car. Sometimes, it seems necessary taking a vacation for a person in a period of time when she really needs a change in her morality, but, in all, there is no comparison between the choice of buying a car and taking a trip. In my opinion, car is a primitive and essential need of everybody in the modern life. We will have and find numerous chances for going a vacation in the future and with having a car, however, we can travel so easier and comfortably.

Living without going vacation and taking trip is feasible, but without a car it will be really difficult today. See around and notice that everything is gotten to do by car. You need a car everywhere you want to go such as shopping center, work, school, friend's house, recreation center, and so on. You can go to a park or cultural center in your neighborhood instead of going a vacation, but you suffer from not having a car all the time. It is possible that you take a taxi or get on the bus for getting places, but it takes lots of your time and might cots tremendous money altogether. Therefore, having a car is the first priority for everyone who is living in the today's community.

Traveling by your own car is more enjoyable and comfortable. My friend who asks me a advice on buying a car or going a vacation, can travel by her own car later. I am sure that she will enjoy traveling by her car and it will cost less than before when she travels by the other ways of transition. In fact, when a person travel by her or his own car, he or she can decide where to stop, when to stop, or he or she even can suddenly decide to choose a detour to getting the place because of enjoying the landscape on the way. As a result, traveling by our car will give us large chances for better decision on the trip rather than we travel by a tour or a public transition.

From my viewpoint, car is a kind of convenience and be accompanied by the advantages which is not comparable to only a vacation. Regarding the advantages of car, I think that it is worth sacrificing something like a pleasure time on trip for buying a car. As a friend and someone who can give some advice and help others, I suggest my friend who hesitates to choose between buying a car or going a vacation that first buy a car, because car is really a necessary need of everybody today and with a car she can travel by her own car comfortably at first chance in the future.

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