60) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Games are as important for adults as they are for children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Games are played by all age group. Hobbies are other fun activities provide a fun way to sharpen skills, express your creativity and many more. This is the way to escape from busy work life, stressful traveling, make new friends. I agree that games are important for adults.
First of all, games are everyone's favorite activity in this world. It is physically very beneficent for adults. After a long day of stressful work playing physical activities are useful in avoiding many health diseases. Physical activities like baseball, football, racket sports, swimming, walking or cycling and many mo...
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