Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
For companies there are several factors that lead to success. One of the most important and most obvious is of course the profit. If a company is not able to generate high earnings and profits it will not be able to survive in our highly competitive world. But besides profits, there are a lot more factors that are important nowadays which I would like to discuss in this essay.
First, to run a successful business you need to have motivated employees. If you only “force” them to work as hard as they can to increase your profits, their motivation will go down and this will lead to worse re...
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