Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Parents are the best teachers. Use specific examples and reasons to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Parents are the best teachers. Use specific examples and reasons to support your answer

Personally, I agree with the idea that parents are the best teachers. They are the ones who can give their children the best teachings. Evnen though the child goes to the school for academic knowledge, parents play an immemnse influence in a child's life and help in the intellectual, moral, and social development and helps him to grow into a mature individual. They are like water and sunlight to seeds of a plant. Just as how seeds grow into tall trees if they get proper water and sunlight; same way a child can grow into a strong and responsible personality if it gets proper training.

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Sentence: To begin with a child learn's a lot from his parents.
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Sentence: Evnen though the child goes to the school for academic knowledge, parents play an immemnse influence in a child's life and help in the intellectual, moral, and social development and helps him to grow into a mature individual.
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Sentence: This incident was very embarassing for my friend who immediately promised never to use that phrase again
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