Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Human beings, by nature, crave for being successful in any aspects of their lives, especially in their career. Hence, the answer to the following question has become of utmost importance: What is the main key to success in a job? There might be a debate whether being able to relate to other people is more important or studying hard in the university. Although in order to be a successful person it is inevitably necessary to be knowledgable, I believe having appropriate ability to connect and communicate with others is more significant because success is not only about having knowledge and it is...

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Sentence: Another examples which means a lot to me is my professor in the university.
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Sentence: Although in order to be a successful person it is inevitably necessary to be knowledgable, I believe having appropriate ability to connect and communicate with others is more significant because success is not only about having knowledge and it is highly to other people.
Error: knowledgable Suggestion: knowledgeable

Sentence: He is such a well-educated and knowledgable person in my country.
Error: well-educated Suggestion: well educated
Error: knowledgable Suggestion: knowledgeable

Sentence: In fact, he is the best in his field of sciense and career.
Error: sciense Suggestion: science

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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.554 4.7
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