In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of thisphenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.

Essay topics: In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this
phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.

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People want to live longer as they have several dreams to fulfill for themselves and for their families. Technological advancement has to a certain extent helped people realized this dream by providing them with facilities unavailable in the past. Hence it is true that people in general live longer now and there are several reasons behind this as mentioned below.

Access to medical services is easy today. During emergency people have several options to get immediate help. They can contact a global helpline number in urgency so that help is provided from a nearby hospital as early as possible. Also today several mobile hospitals travel around city for aid. Even in rural areas, due to se ...

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