Integrated writing

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The reading passage mainly tries to count the advantages of dog breeding. However, the lecture opposes to it in some aspects.

According to the passage, breeders are professionals who know about the genetic bases of breeding and are comprehensively familiar with the characteristics of each breed. The lecturer disagrees with such claim and underlines the poor understanding of most of the breeders, she calls them back-yard breeders, in both scientific and ethical aspects of breeding. They primarily produce dogs in their back yard and sell them to improper people for their own profit not the do...

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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 27 out of 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 9
No. of Words: 247 250
No. of Characters: 1291 900
No. of Different Words: 154 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.964 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.227 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.913 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 95 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 53 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.583 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.652 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.417 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.336 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.591 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.121 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4