People attend college or university for many different reasons ( for example: new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge) why do you think people attend college or university.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, education is important because it makes our dreams come true. Every year several people join college or university for many different reasons. Pursuing in college is a means to discover new things which we don't know about and increase our knowledge. Here are some reasons why people attend college or university.
First, People need good stable job to achieve their goals and for better standard of living. Most companies hire graduate people. Attending college improves our communication ability, increases self-confidence, gives motivation which are very essential in career developmen...
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 312 350
No. of Characters: 1620 1500
No. of Different Words: 190 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.203 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.192 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 102 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.274 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.489 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.078 0.07
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