The rules that the whole societies today expect to young people to follow and obey are too strict
In the history of human beings, we have experienced many revolutions for many different purposes. For example, many Americans attended into the Civil War to acquire the liberty and some prominent scientists create many fascinating techniques such as computer and Internet in order to develop a broader platform to share the resources. During these revolutions we broke many rules. But there are still many people hold the view that the rules we impose on the young people are too rigid and strict to obey and people should offer relax ambience to our young people. From my perspective, I think the ru...
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Sentence: Take my brother Joey as an example; He was a software engineer two years before but he was not very happy at all because investigating the software cannot attract his interest and he must fact to the boring codes on the computer screen.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to must and fact
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No. of Words: 603 350
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Different Words: 250 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.955 4.7
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.51 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.235 0.07
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