Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. Would you rather be self-employed, work for someone else, or own a business? Use specific reasons to explain your choice.
Why shall we have to put ourselves into a jobs or occupations? One thing for sure is that we probably need to make a living through those jobs which can provide us sufficient dollars to raise up a family. But the level of salary has an obvious gap between working for employers and own a business myself. So I have the opinion that we should start at the lower level as an employee, then, as our qualification goes up, we had better run a company or factory as an employer.
As we step into the competitive society, which has tens of thousands of competitor, we should start our work as a milks or ...
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Sentence: With the gaining of experiences, much more understanding, and the hints of how to make it best, it won't take for so long before you have a chance to climb up to a place of manager, which means you have receive the complement from your senior and your supervisor so that they give you a promotion.
Description: A verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to have and receive
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Avg. Sentence Length: 31.818 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.25 7.5
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No. of Words: 350 350
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