some teenagers prefer leaving alone while some prefer staying with their parent what is your point of view
To me it is always good for teenagers to stay with their parent till they get to the stage of getting married, because this will help them have someone to correct their wrong doings and someone to advice them to plan their features.
It as always be a question to me, why we have a lot of nuisance,and drug abuse teenagers. But the answer is also as close as the question which is that it is because their is no body to correct them that what they are doing is rung that is why they are doing what they are doing what they are doing. If you ever see a teenager that is leaving with is or are parent, they are always in good care of their parent. For example if a teenager leaving with is parent change one of a sudden, his parent will be the first to know and once they know, they will find a solution to it immediately. Though it is not all teenagers that leave with their parent that are of good attitude but more than half of them are successful.
If a young teenager leaving with his parent have some amount of money that is sufficient for him to start a business, and he told his parent about it. They will advice him on how to spend the money judiciously. But if he is staying alone, and he is playing with the rung type of people, he might spend the money lavishly.
With the above two point i think i would like to say that it is good to stay with your parent than to live alone.
Sentence: But the answer is also as close as the question which is that it is because their is no body to correct them that what they are doing is rung that is why they are doing what they are doing what they are doing.
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Sentence: For example if a teenager leaving with is parent change one of a sudden, his parent will be the first to know and once they know, they will find a solution to it immediately.
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