Which of the followings would you most like to change to improve your health? The kind of food you eat, the amount of exercise, or level of stress.
Saying, “ I want to be pretty/handsome and healthy” is in almost everyone’s mind. Also, it represents that, nowadays, people tend to interest in taking care of their health. In Fact, there are several ways which are able to improve our health, such as the kind of food you eat, the amount of exercise, or level of stress. In my opinion, the kind of food we eat would be my best choice that I would focus on.
To begin with, food is a source of essential nutrition that a body needs. In order to body’s development and functional balancing, every single cell needs energy and completed subs...
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