many students do volunteer work in schools or communities. if you are a volunteer, what kind of volunteer work do you interested to do? Gardening in community, doing activities with children or cleaning a place in the city. Explain why you are interested to do this work. Include reasons and examples to support your response.
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The firs reason is great but you put a lot of time for it. Better to keep balance:
first 1-2 sentences: introduction. my opinion: A or B. agree or disagree. about 5-10 seconds
First, reason 1 and the example: about 15 seconds
Second, reason 2 and the example: about 15 seconds
Third, reason 3 (optional)
Conclusion: one sentence.(optional)