65. Do you agree or disagree: Students should wear uniform in school? Pleaseinclude specific details and examples in your opinion.

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65. Do you agree or disagree: Students should wear uniform in school? Please
include specific details and examples in your opinion.

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Everything is fine, except the last sentence. It is duplicated to the topic sentence of reason two. according the to the pattern:

First, reason 1 (1 sentence) + why reason 1 (some arguments. 1-2 sentence) + a small conclusion for reason 1(like advantages of reason 1 or comparisons if not reason 1, 1-2 sentence). // about 15-20 seconds

Second, reason 2 (1 sentence) + why reason 2 (some arguments. 1-2 sentence) + a small conclusion for reason 2(like advantages of reason 2 or comparisons if not reason 2, 1-2 sentence). // about 15-20 seconds

the last sentences should be something about the advantages of uniform. for example: students can concentrate on study; schools will get better reputations...etc..
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we realized duplicated content is somehow a big issue for you. It is hard to reach a high mark with similar content.