73. Some believe that the students should do some part-time jobs or summerinterns to determine their future career. Do you agree or disagree with theopinion and why?

20 in 30

extra sentences:
'for example, if they do some jobs in summer time...'

'third, if they are doing...'

//you can remove sentences starting with 'if' since you already made the condition in the first sentence. you have this issue on other speeches
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Don't just give two sentence for one reason in reason two. we need at least three sentences to support one reason:

reason, why reason, advantages/disadvantages of reasons
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make reasons simpler. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.