The topic is:
78. Do you agree or disagree that students will learn more when they have discussions, why?
22 in 30
You have issues on the last sentence. for example, in the reason two, the last sentence is: 'there we get a lot of information in a different way.' is duplicated to the reason two.
in our pattern, we expect the last sentence is about the advantages/disadvantages of the reason, they should be specific. we may say: the information will help them for a good grade or better understanding to topics.
The topic is:
78. Do you agree or disagree that students will learn more when they have discussions, why?
22 in 30
You have issues on the last sentence. for example, in the reason two, the last sentence is: 'there we get a lot of information in a different way.' is duplicated to the reason two.
in our pattern, we expect the last sentence is about the advantages/disadvantages of the reason, they should be specific. we may say: the information will help them for a good grade or better understanding to topics.