some-schools-require-students-bring-their-own-computers-classroom-do-you-agree- or disagree ??

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 503.0 444.711560045 113% => OK
No of words: 142.0 116.580246914 122% => OK
Chars per words: 3.54225352113 3.81502700369 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.28032121604 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.85617826152 1.8723322822 99% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 76.076318743 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640845070423 0.655143326166 98% => OK
Syllable count: 159.3 141.574747475 113% => OK
Avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.21358024691 91% => OK

Performance on coherence:
Topic speech coherence ratio: 0.088621004057 0.0738818816272 120% => OK

Acoustic performance on paragraphs:
How many acoustic paragraphs: 1.0 3.20202020202 31% => OK
Average paragraph length: 142.0 60.3232687746 235% => The average paragraph length is high.
STD paragraph length: 0.0 17.3634065801 0% => OK
Average paragraph duration: 44.49 22.9064221017 194% => OK
STD paragraph duration: 0.0 6.49597621602 0% => The duration of acoustic paragraphs keeps same.

Acoustic performance on sentences:
How many acoustic sentences: 19.0 31.1548821549 61% => OK
Average acoustic sentence length: 7.47368421053 4.0588447711 184% => OK
STD acoustic sentence length: 6.37733173912 3.18357895611 200% => The length of acoustic sentences changes so often.
Average acoustic sentences duration: 2.31842105263 1.46810986539 158% => OK
STD acoustic sentences duration: 2.00911675582 1.01537252472 198% => OK

Acoustic performance on acoustic silence:(An acoustic silence means a little pause between two or more words)
How many acoustic silence: 18.0 28.6644219978 63% => OK
Total acoustic silence duration: 3.72 5.28593714927 70% => OK
Average acoustic silence duration: 0.206666666667 0.187982170178 110% => OK
STD acoustic silence duration: 0.134536240471 0.154715141812 87% => OK

Acoustic performance on acoustic words:
Total word duration: 38.7 35.408047138 109% => OK
Average word duration: 0.272535211268 0.306236595465 89% => OK
STD word duration: 0.139820995319 0.198589292138 70% => OK

Disfluencies: like hesitations, or 'ehn' or taking a long time to pronounce a word:
How many disfluencies: 2.0 6.3164983165 32% => Good job, the lower, the better.
Total_disfluencies_duration: 1.4 5.14435465769 27% => Good job. The lower, the better.
Total acoustic noise duration: 0.46 2.80480359147 16% => Good job. The lower, the better.

Acoustic rates:
Total speech duration: 44.49 45.0716498316 99% => OK
Compare to expected duration: 0.988666666667 1.00159221848 99% => OK
Rate of silence: 0.404585300067 0.637764685501 63% => OK
Rate of speech: 3.19172847831 2.58495923209 123% => OK
Rate of speech by unique words: 2.04540346145 1.68816559523 121% => OK
Rate of word duration by unique words: 2.35142118863 2.15290372801 109% => OK
Average articulation rates: 0.33111378169 0.343871460585 96% => OK

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It may have duplicated content. Need to use the words more efficiently.

Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by speech e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the speech e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas.

21 in 30

1. after the example, need to give a result of the example, like: after the first example, we may say:

....I got a bad grade because of the computer.

2. the second example is somehow duplicated to the topic sentence. we may follow our patterns:

reason + why reason + result of the reason

talk like this:
second, some students do not own computers.(reason)
Computers are expensive and some students are from families that don't have good financial situations.(why reason)
It may give burdens for those families, and students without computers may get frustrated in the classes. (result of the reason)
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this user got 29 in speaking and he followed our patterns very well:
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