Which is better, listening to others' advice or learning from personal experience? Why? Please include specific reasons and examples in your response.

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The second reason is duplicated to reason one.

another issue for your speaking is that for any reason, you need a topic sentence or a short reason, then give arguments to support it, like this:

First, reason 1 (1 sentence) + why reason 1 (some arguments. 1-2 sentence) + a small conclusion for reason 1(like advantages of reason 1 or comparisons if not reason 1, 1-2 sentence). // about 15 seconds

Second, reason 2 (1 sentence) + why reason 2 (some arguments. 1-2 sentence) + a small conclusion for reason 2(like advantages of reason 2 or comparisons if not reason 2, 1-2 sentence). // about 15 seconds
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while you don't have topic sentences. You have a very long sentence. Need a topic sentence or a short reason like 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' .