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statement of purpose

To Whom it May Concern:

My full name is Ha Cam Tu. Currently, I am a third-year student at the School of International Business and Marketing at the University of Economics, Ho Chi Minh City.

I am writing this letter to apply for a one-semester scholarship of the Taiwan Student Exchange Program at Yuan Ze University, which provides a totally brand new environment for me to study and practice in Taiwan.

Yuan Ze University has been well-known for a long time thanks to the school’s reputation for higher education in Taiwan. For Vietnamese students in general and specifically for a third-year student like me, Yuan Ze University is an ideal school because the institution provides a lesson in both Chinese and English. As I have been staying in the course which provides one-hundred-percent lesson learned in English, this is truly an advantage for me. Another reason for choosing Yuan Ze University is the promised studying outcome. As students who have studied in Taiwan tend to succeed in finding a future job in Vietnam in top high-level enterprises.

Being awarded a chance to study further in my field at Yuan Ze University is an incredible opportunity. Foremost, YZU currently provides an international environment for foreign students to learn and experience in the field of International Business and many more. Also, the Taiwan education system has a very good reputation and assures quality education. Since it is a safe country with multicultural and a welcoming environment. As a result, not only do I can achieve more knowledge related to my major in a well-developed environment. I also could accomplish precious value from cultural exchange.

YZU provide such a huge amount of valuable course for an exchange student in another country. As an international business student, these are courses brought by YZU which draw my attention: Strategic management of multinational corporations, consumer behavior, creative thinking and problem solving, organization behavior.

My recent major mainly focus on international business. As the course’s name mentioned, once I take this course, I will have a chance to approach the international market with huge related aspects. Besides, after more than 2 years of studying higher education, I am confident with the knowledge about international business management, along with supply chain and logistics. Nevertheless, I would like to meet other courses to expand my understanding

Spending time considering my career, I make sure Business Administration is my desired one. As the program offer courses intimately related to my target field such as the “ strategic management of multinational corporation” course, it plays a vital role in assisting me in pursuing essentially specialized knowledge.

Moreover, I plan to join my family business when I come back to my homeland or even if I want to go for a job, along with a strong educational background this study will help me in making a difference in my professional life.

During my studying in Vietnam, I have endeavored to improve my study. As an illustration, I was awarded a scholarship by my University in the previous semester thanks to good academic results and well done extracurricular. I have joined substantial extracurricular activities until now, namely: blood donation; run for the heart, an outdoor activity organized to raise funds to heart surgery for poor children. In my second year, I am a delegate in a forum of Youth Speak Vietnam which focus about 17 sustainable development goal of the UN.

Consequently, I assure you that whichever the studying environment is, I can quickly adapt and integrate. For the spring semester at Yuan Ze University, my study will start from February to the end of June. During this period, I will give it my best shot to balance life and study

As an international business student and having an opportunity to take part in this international student exchange program is what I truly dream of. Being offered this chance will change me to a better version. I will strive as hard as I can to best represent myself and reward those who have granted me a chance to prove such.

Since I am already in my third year at University, I would like to state that Problem-solving and Teamwork is a daily task that I enjoy and required to do. Consequently, these two above skills could be considered as my advantage as I spent a significant amount of time practicing it. Besides, I am thought to be good at organizing others’ opinions and ideas. Consequently, with those mentioned skills, I will apply them well during the program in Taiwan if I have the opportunity to do so

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