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Statement of purpose for PhD in Oral Biology

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In a review of human history, there are outstanding sections which have enlightened the rest of the history to the far future. In my opinion, Charles Darwin placed the corner stone of a drastic revolution in human perception of life and nature. The eminent theory of evolution which has its roots in glamorous works of Darwin, the biologist, has dramatically changed our perspective to life forever. This is why I have always been fascinated by biology and exploring the secret of life.

As a young female in a society inundated with gender discrimination, I worked hard to follow my dreams. I successfully entered university and was the top student both in undergraduate and postgraduate periods ...

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Sentence: I believe that a PhD course of Oral Developmental Biology is exactly the diving board which direct me straight forward toward my desired destination.
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Sentence: I hope to be the one who may further the knowledge of humans even a tiny bit further.
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Score: 6.0 out of 6
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
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No. of Sentences: 28 15
No. of Words: 683 350
No. of Characters: 3552 1500
No. of Different Words: 354 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.112 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.201 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 158 40
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.393 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.869 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.357 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.27 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.452 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.07 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5

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