Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's life. others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Every stage of life is a combination of both happiness and sadness. The definition of happiness is different from person to person. Some people are happy if they are healthy and others if they are wealthy. Some people argue that the teenage part of life is the happiest, while others believe that the adult part of life is happier. In my opinion, adulthood is the happiest stage of everyone's life.
There are multiple reasons that mature people enjoy their life considerably more than under eighteen ones. First and foremost, adults are free to decide what is good and bad for them. Moreover, people do not have access to some places if they are not over eighteen. For Example, teenagers have no access to entertainment clubs and adult places. Not only that, but some activities also have an age restriction. To illustrate, people cannot drive a vehicle and drinking alcohol before eighteen in some countries. what is more, they can enjoy a variety of life events such as becoming husband and father.
Despite this, adulthood brings a lot of opportunities for us such as employment, visiting different countries for higher education, and explore the global culture. The people have a good understanding at this stage of life. Finally, they can get a chance to become independent.
On the contrast side, we cannot be denied that the teenage stage has some benefits. To start with, they have not any responsibilities apart from their routine activities such as playing, studying, eating, and sleeping. Additionally, parents are always available to fulfill their teenage children's wishes. Besides that, the mistakes made by them easily forgive because they are not mature. Furthermore, they are not responsible for any family issues and financial problems.
To conclude, it is irrefutable that life before an adult is very easy and enjoyable. Underage people can only enjoy limited and specific things, while adult people can live their lives independently and experience various things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 511, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, apart from, for example, such as, in my opinion, to start with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16408668731 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74356863593 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56346749226 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2432248879 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.8181818182 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6818181818 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284752349313 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829086662174 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699421266219 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157126374124 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102408419175 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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