The chart below shows the average hours spent per day in leisure and sports activities, by youngest and oldest populations, in the US, in 2015.
The bar chart delineates the average number of hours allocated to six different activities by the oldest and youngest populations in the US in 2015.
Overall, the younger group tended to enjoy active activities including socializing, using computers for entertainment and engaging in physical activities while their old counterparts preferred passive activities, namely watching TV, reading and relaxing. It is also notable that watching TV was the most popular activity for both groups.
As for inactive activities, watching TV took most of the time of both young and old people, with figures being 2.4 and 4.5 hours respectively. While senior citizens spent 1 hour every day on reading, the youth only allocated a fifth of that to this activity. Relaxing was also not popular among teenagers as they dedicated only 0.1 hours to this, compared to 0.6 hours of old people.
In terms of more active activities, while young people spent more time on this category, both groups showed relatively small figures. In particular, socializing took a quite similar amount of time for both, with the young allocating 0.8 hours to this activity, only 0.1 hours more than the older group. However, young people seemed to enjoy playing games more as they spent 1.1 hours on this form of entertainment, about two times higher than the figure for senior citizens. Sports and exercise took up 0.6 and 0.2 hours of young and old people’s everyday time respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 361, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ople seemed to enjoy playing games more as they spent 1.1 hours on this form of en...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, as for, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16033755274 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7244382995 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57805907173 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.254392052 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.3 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22620205701 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10207252025 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105983315625 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174632347615 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137999822097 0.0819641961636 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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