Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time.
Do you agree.
Give reasons for your answere and include any relevant example from your experience.
Education means all round development of an individual and not necessarily only a finished syllabus or courses which are being run by institutes , schools , colleges or universities. Education includes activities which could develop one's brains, make an individual socially adaptable also teach an individual to be self motivated , self reliant , dependable , courageous and truthful. But should the activities be educational all the time? is a question of eternal debate.
Many people are in favour that the children's leisure activities must be educational rather than being only leisure activit...
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Sentence: Education means all round development of an individual and not neccessarily only a finished syllabus or courses which are being run by institutes , schools , colleges or universities.
Error: neccessarily Suggestion: necessarily
Sentence: If we keep moulding a child's brain using same old techniques and philosophies then perhaps children would loose their chilhood and also the essence of life.
Error: chilhood Suggestion: childhood
Sentence: It also taught me adaptability by letting me hide into samll places, it taught me flexibility , quick decision making and team spirit , which I think would have been difficult to learn, had I been playing chess by sitting against a friend inside the four walls of my house.
Error: samll Suggestion: small
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