different modes of transport used tpo travel to and from work in one european city in 1950, 1970 and 1990 are discussed in the graph below.
The vertical graph demonstrates diverse modes of transport used to commute from home to work over period of 40 years in an European city. The vertical axis represents the proportion of travels while horizontal axis depicts time period in in years.
It can be clearly seen that overall trends illustrate the popularity of foot to mobile was overtaken by cars in the review of given 4 decades. From 1950 to 1990, the figure of travels made by bus leveled out at around 15 percent except 1970 when it hiked to about 25 percent.In addition, the car users made a terrific improvement, rising from about ...
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