NOW DAYS OF MODERNIZATION TAKING PLACE VERY FAST . LIVING STANDARDS OF PEOPLE ARE GETTING HIGH DAY BY DAY , TO MAINTAIN THAT LEVEL MANY MORE GOING TO SPEND THERE RESPECTIVE EARNINGS ON GOOD CLOTHES. PURCHASING OF HIGH PAID BEAUTY PRODUCTS TO ENHANCE THIER APPEARANCE.
FIRSTLY,IT IS GOOD TO IMPROVE OUR STANDARDS OF LIVING. PRESENTLY THE SITUATIONS ARE THAT, A PERSON IS ONLY JUDGED ON THE BASIS OF THERE LOOKS REGARDLESS OF THEIR INNER BEAUTY. TO MAINTAIN THAT THINGS MUCH MONEY IS SPEND BY PEOPLE . SECONDLY, IT IS USED AS CONFIDENCE BOOSTER BY PEOPLE TO FEEL QUITE CONFIDENT WHEN THEY ARE WELL DRESSED.IN THESE DAYS WE ARE SURROUNDED BY ELECTRONIC MEDIA WHERE PEOPLE TENDS TO SHOW OFF THEMSELVES TO SATISFY THEIR EGO.BUT THEY DO NOT THINK THAT MONEY IS NOT EVERYTHING.AS WE KNOW CHARITY STRATA FROM HOME, BUT THERE ARE HANDFUL OF PEOPLE WHO LIVE ABOVE THESE MATERIALISTIC THINGS.THEY USE MONEY FOR MANY NOBLE CAUSES LIKE THEY DO CHARITY, SUPPORT ORPHANAGES, PROVIDE SHELTER TO HOMELESS PEOPLE AND MANY MORE.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... OF MODERNIZATION TAKING PLACE VERY FAST . LIVING STANDARDS OF PEOPLE ARE GETTING...
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Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...RY FAST . LIVING STANDARDS OF PEOPLE ARE GETTING HIGH DAY BY DAY , TO MAINTAIN TH...
^^
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...S OF PEOPLE ARE GETTING HIGH DAY BY DAY , TO MAINTAIN THAT LEVEL MANY MORE GOING ...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , IT
... TO ENHANCE THIER APPEARANCE. FIRSTLY,IT IS GOOD TO IMPROVE OUR STANDARDS OF LIV...
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Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... ONLY JUDGED ON THE BASIS OF THERE LOOKS REGARDLESS OF THEIR INNER BEAUTY. TO MAI...
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Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Y. TO MAINTAIN THAT THINGS MUCH MONEY IS SPEND BY PEOPLE . SECONDLY, IT IS USED A...
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: Spent
... TO MAINTAIN THAT THINGS MUCH MONEY IS SPEND BY PEOPLE . SECONDLY, IT IS USED AS CON...
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Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...AT THINGS MUCH MONEY IS SPEND BY PEOPLE . SECONDLY, IT IS USED AS CONFIDENCE BOOS...
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Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...DLY, IT IS USED AS CONFIDENCE BOOSTER BY PEOPLE TO FEEL QUITE CONFIDENT WHEN THEY...
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Line 3, column 557, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'handfuls', 'handsful'?
Suggestion: Handfuls; Handsful
...CHARITY STRATA FROM HOME, BUT THERE ARE HANDFUL OF PEOPLE WHO LIVE ABOVE THESE MATERIAL...
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Line 3, column 746, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ELTER TO HOMELESS PEOPLE AND MANY MORE.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 167.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10179640719 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68482857894 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688622754491 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 153.50982153 49.4020404114 311% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 121.714285714 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263543623158 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112087312886 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864314575374 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191720144576 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222160231834 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.