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Was a fight really essential in the first place which not only affects the concerned parties but the people in the other parts of the World?
With the good amount of journalism we currently have, it seems we are inundated with news stories that leave an impact upon us. The recent news about the chemical weapon attack in Syria pains me a lot. Seeing the scourge of people dying and mutilated by the chemical weapons that were unleashed was very disconcerting to watch.
People irrespective of their religion, cast or creed need to be treated equally and fairly. Constructive dialogue needs to be initiated within different sects to avoid such horrific acts. In this era, where technology has surpassed everybody’s expectations, it shoul...
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- Was a fight really essential in the first place which not only affects the concerned parties but the people in the other parts of the World? 90
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