In some countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This Trend is seriously damaging our quality of life. Agree or disagree.
Multinational companies nowadays find it easy; both to market their product all over the world and set up factories wherever they find it convenient. In my opinion this has had great effect on our quality of life in two main areas.
The first area is their products. Globalization would agree that multinational companies make high-quality goods available to most of the people. While this may be true to some extent, it also means that we have less choices of the products to buy. When powerful multinational companies invade local markets with fewer resources to go out of business. In consequence, we are obliged to buy multinational products whether we like them or not.
Probing ahead, It is sometimes said that multinational Companies and globalization are making societies more open. This.may be true. However, I would argue that as a result the human race is losing its cultural diversity. If we consumed different products, societies all over the world would be more varied.This can be seen by the fact that we all shop in similar multinational supermarkets and buy identical products wherever we live.
All in all, I believe that if we as voters pressured our government to make multinational companies more responsible and to protect local producers from outside competition, we could have the benefits of globalization without its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, while, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18636363636 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14167863221 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622727272727 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3204086422 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0833333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250827823824 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906458341324 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434468867806 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153034755338 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320423702216 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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