Nowadays many young people leave home at an early age to either study or work in another city. Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages for young people? Support your point of view with reasons.
It is rightly said that" youngsters are the future of the country". They need good education and support from government of country. In today's era, young people mostly prefer to go to big cities for their studies or for work; leave their homes in a small ages. It has more merits than its demerits also, I shall explore the same in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are normally more benefits of study or work in other city for youth. The reason behind this is lack of good equipment as well as lack of jobs in their towns or village. When they go outside of their homes and work hard it enhances their knowledge moreover, in the future they do not find any difficulty on their way to achieve success. They reach their destination on time without help of any other person. A good epitome of this would be a survey conducted by Haryana government claimed that 97% of young people live in big cities for their studies and work as well.
Probing ahead, the second reason for this trend is that they are pressurized by their parents so that they do not sway from their path. It helps them to concentrate on their work more and when they do well in their academics they are selected for higher jobs in developed cities with high salaries. They motivates other person's to come in city and study for their carrier. Because cities gives many opportunities to youngsters and also help them to improve their studies as well as their work. For instance, there are 80% of students who are unemployed and after they go to cities almost many of them find perfect job in their own field of study.
To conclude, According to my point of view it is not a bad thing to go to big cities for studies or work purposes but it enhances one's knowledge and polish their skills too. Also, it depends on a person whether he use his mind in studies or in other work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so, well, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49411764706 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34815690073 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497058823529 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2188943112 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180026711942 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721127727292 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613320450523 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13270254404 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297173744348 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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