Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of High School programs (for example working for charity improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree?
"Helping others fills a person with pride and joy". also another person thinks that they are very good person. Although, there are many programs in High School; should unpaid community service be mandatory part of it. I am totally agree with the statement and shall explain the same in the upcoming paragraphs
To commence with, unpaid community service are very specific part of our life because youngsters are the future of our country and they should know about the manners as well as about our own aesthetic values. It will fill their whole body with courage and reluctancy will be decreased from their mind which directly effect on Economy of a country because when they know how to change their future then, they fully concentrate on their work. For instance, in Amritsar there is a school which gives knowledge to their student about value of as well as they have contribute almost 20 thousand to orphanage in Amritsar.
Probing ahead, sports also play very crucial role in our country's development. when they contribute to help those student who have no money as well as any particular place from where buy the sports related things then, they feel upset and quit the sports and a country will loses one good player.High School will be provided with honour for their day and night contribution to community services. Moreover, sun shines in day and give its light to others same like a Sun they will brighten the light in the sky. The best episode of this could be a great cricketer Sachin who l has recently adopted a minor child from a community and pledged to give him a better lifestyle and provide education.
In conclusion, there are lots of answers to the question. however, I believe that this type of activities encourage youngsters to help others and it let them know about sentiment of poor people so, it should be mandatory in school programs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84161490683 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48938373188 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552795031056 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.5158491772 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.916666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170512825626 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638218767753 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821952527343 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107132380111 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238361615416 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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