The best way to reduce youth crime is to educate their parents with parental skills. To what extent you agree or disagree.
" Education is like a candle which burns and darkness go away" . Educative person is capable of facing every difficult situation. Crimes by younger generation increased day by day, to reduce the crime; should parents be educated with parental skills or not? According to my perception, it is best way to get rid from serious crimes and I shall give some reasons for my agreement.
To begin with, we should know the reasons of crimes by youngsters as well as benefit of parental skills. Firstly, when parents do not recognize their child interpersonal skills and forced them to choose stream according to their parents wish such as engineering, doctor and so on. Besides it, when parents started support their children to do work according to their interest. There will less chance of youth yo give birth to serious crimes like snatching, murdering and other crimes reduced by 27% in india in last year. Because youth may feel independent.
Probing ahead, when a child indulge in bad companh and do wrong things like smoking, drinking, gambling, and start to go serious crimes for needs of drugs. At that moment every parent seems helpless, and they start abusing their own child but, instead of treated them harshly. every parents should firstly know the reason behind it and then tackle the situation with care and making decision with their heart as well as talking to their child in isolation.for instance 2 youngsters have freedom to live their own life in their own way after their parents educated with skills called parental.
To conclude, I take the ground that parents should appreciate their child work as well as they should understand them in every situation, also youth should not break their parents trust.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rsonal skills and forced them to choose stream according to their parents wish such as...
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...s reduced by 27% in india in last year. Because youth may feel independent. Probing ah...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, well, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99653979239 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4799217509 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581314878893 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2349056992 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.076923077 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385505214015 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133022014474 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845736119937 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242502720751 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480878170222 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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