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Some people agree that teachers should be strict with their students; others believe that teachers with friendly approach will achieve better results.
In every society education especially schools are very important. Teachers play important roles in their student's life. Undoubtedly, all of us hear a lot of story about good teacher and bad teacher and we have always had a dream to have a nice teacher. Some people believe teacher should have better relation with their students and other are not agree with this idea.
First let's consider strict approach teaching. If teachers being so strict at classroom, students are afraid from them and they also afraid when are have done a mistake. Besides, because of their fear they could not learn as th...
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Sentence: Besides, because of their fear they could not learn as their parents expected, so this may causes some distraction in classroom.
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Sentence: These goals are gain if teachers and student cooperate with each others.
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the most important responsibilities of teachers is teaching students
the most important responsibilities of teachers are teaching students
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Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 271 350
No. of Characters: 1332 1500
No. of Different Words: 146 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.057 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.915 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.437 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 92 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 70 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.067 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.865 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.347 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.545 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.129 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5