Your friend recently had a new baby born and you have bought him/her a present. Write a letter and say
- What is the present?
- Why did you choose it?
- Arrange a visit to pass on the present and see the baby.
Dear Sarah,
I hope this letter finds you well. I heard my lovely princess finally was born on last Friday.
I am honored to be her godmother. As her godmother I wanted to buy a special present for her. Last weekend, my husband and I went to baby shop and after a lot of searching I decided to buy a baby carriage for her. Its brand is Murphy and it has a good quality. It has a seat belt and four wheels. Besides, it has a small bag too.
I bought this present just for one reason. I remember you said in one of your letter you will need a baby carriage, if you want go to park or somewhere else. I hope this present is the exactly thing that you need.
I am going to come to your city next weekend and see you and my lovely girl. I will be there on Sunday, and I will come over around five in pm. Please let me know if this time is good for you.
See you soon,
Mari.
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I hope this present is the exactly thing that you need.
I hope this present is exactly the thing that you need.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 173 200
No. of Characters: 641 1000
No. of Different Words: 98 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.627 4.0
Average Word Length: 3.705 4.6
Word Length SD: 1.962 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 34 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 21 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 8 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 4 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.357 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.727 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.357 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.379 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.589 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.263 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4