The provided line chart depicts the mean monthly temperatures for three large metropolises. The table contains the data on the total number of sunny hours per year, for these same cities.
Overall, it is noticeable that the mean monthly values in London and New York follow the similar pattern, while Sydney has significantly different trajectory of this measure. London has roughly two times less sunshine per year than the other two cities.
The closer look at the line graph reveals that Sydney starts and finishes the year at around 25 degrees Celsius. The first half of the year brings steady decrease in the mean monthly temperature, which bottoms in mid-July at some 15 degrees Celsius. Afterwards, the mean temperature goes up again, before reaching 25 degrees Celsius in December. This city has the second largest number of the sunny hours per year (2.473).
London and New York share typical four-season patterns, with low average temperatures of under 15 degrees Celsius from November until March. Unlike Sydney, these cities record the highest temperatures in July, however it is noticeable that New York has consistently higher averages than London. In addition, New York has twice as many sunny hours as London, topping even Sydney in this category.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20975609756 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52875903333 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59512195122 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.078679147 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0909090909 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26871803422 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997399309429 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655061592696 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156974128969 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641217027871 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.