According to the author, this area's residents like to store energy at home gradually, and there are new appliances and passive sloar heating equipments in the market. Thus the author predicted that the demands of electicity for this area will not increase hence the new construction of generating plants will not be necessary either. While given the reasons , the judgements by the author are problematic.Let's rexamine them including ,the users and appliants and generating plants carefully.
To begin with, the rencet survey isn't convincing without the range of residents and the reasons why they conserve energy. In this survey, the author merely tell us more and more residents are willing to store power but does not tell us how many of them in total, which means we do not know the people's portion among the whole residents. Maybe just a few people have a try of storing energy at home. So in this condition it could not represent the trend of this area. Moreover, the author does not develve into this survey to find out why they want to do so. There is a high possility the the electricity price is too high that these residents can not afford to it. This would make the author reshedule the strategey of the electric power company.
Secondly,the emergence of new saving-enery appliances shows no relevance to the decreasing of electricity using. The author notes that the manufactures are marketing new appliances which could save half energy than before, meanwhile the new technology of insualtion and passive solar heating will reduce the demands of electricity enery for heating. While the author does not mentions how many people bought these appliances.Due to the stability of home appliances like fridges,maybe there are few people will change their appliances in well conditions. What's more, the new technology of inslation and passive solar heating is not presented as equipments for home use, the author does not tell us when these new technology will appear in themarket, so we can not conclude the demands of electricity will not increase.
Finally, as the author predicts thatr the demands of electriciy will not increase, there is an important issue we need to notice that the author suggests that the company needn't build new plants given the power generating by three plants which built twenty years ago is enough. This prediction is precarious by the fact that the three panlts have been in working for twenty years, duo to the consideration of safety, I suggest the author to evaluate the plants first to make sure their stability then to make further choice.
In conclusion, the author does not show the evidence to prove that the demands of electricity is declining, he should make a wide survey to make sure whether his predicment is right.
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: According to the author, this area's residents like to store energy at home gradually, and there are new appliances and passive sloar heating equipments in the market.
Error: sloar Suggestion: soar
Sentence: Thus the author predicted that the demands of electicity for this area will not increase hence the new construction of generating plants will not be necessary either.
Error: electicity Suggestion: electricity
Sentence: While given the reasons , the judgements by the author are problematic.Let's rexamine them including ,the users and appliants and generating plants carefully.
Error: rexamine Suggestion: examine
Error: appliants Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: To begin with, the rencet survey isn't convincing without the range of residents and the reasons why they conserve energy.
Error: isn Suggestion: ion
Error: rencet Suggestion: rent
Sentence: Moreover, the author does not develve into this survey to find out why they want to do so.
Error: develve Suggestion: devolve
Sentence: There is a high possility the the electricity price is too high that these residents can not afford to it.
Error: possility Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: This would make the author reshedule the strategey of the electric power company.
Error: strategey Suggestion: strategy
Error: reshedule Suggestion: resemble
Sentence: Secondly,the emergence of new saving-enery appliances shows no relevance to the decreasing of electricity using.
Error: saving-enery Suggestion: saving every
Sentence: The author notes that the manufactures are marketing new appliances which could save half energy than before, meanwhile the new technology of insualtion and passive solar heating will reduce the demands of electricity enery for heating.
Error: insualtion Suggestion: insulation
Error: enery Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: What's more, the new technology of inslation and passive solar heating is not presented as equipments for home use, the author does not tell us when these new technology will appear in themarket, so we can not conclude the demands of electricity will not increase.
Error: inslation Suggestion: inflation
Error: themarket Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Finally, as the author predicts thatr the demands of electriciy will not increase, there is an important issue we need to notice that the author suggests that the company needn't build new plants given the power generating by three plants which built twenty years ago is enough.
Error: needn Suggestion: need
Error: electriciy Suggestion: electricity
Error: thatr Suggestion: thats
Sentence: This prediction is precarious by the fact that the three panlts have been in working for twenty years, duo to the consideration of safety, I suggest the author to evaluate the plants first to make sure their stability then to make further choice.
Error: duo Suggestion: do
Error: panlts Suggestion: pants
Sentence: In conclusion, the author does not show the evidence to prove that the demands of electricity is declining, he should make a wide survey to make sure whether his predicment is right.
Error: predicment Suggestion: predicament
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 469 350
No. of Characters: 2266 1500
No. of Different Words: 215 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.654 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.832 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.544 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 154 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 105 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 78 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 63 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.588 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.489 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.706 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.355 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.57 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.151 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
According to the author, this areas residents like to store energ...
^^
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
According to the author, this areas residents like to store energy at...
^^^^
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...sloar heating equipments in the market. Thus the author predicted that the demands o...
^^^^
Line 1, column 359, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ecessary either. While given the reasons , the judgements by the author are proble...
^^
Line 1, column 407, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Lets
...udgements by the author are problematic.Lets rexamine them including ,the users and ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 435, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...problematic.Lets rexamine them including ,the users and appliants and generating p...
^^
Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ly. To begin with, the rencet survey isnt convincing without the range of residen...
^^^^
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ncing without the range of residents and the reasons why they conserve energy. In...
^^
Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...but does not tell us how many of them in total, which means we do not know the pe...
^^
Line 3, column 587, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ant to do so. There is a high possility the the electricity price is too high that thes...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 587, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ant to do so. There is a high possility the the electricity price is too high that thes...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... the electric power company. Secondly,the emergence of new saving-enery appliance...
^^^^
Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mands of electricity enery for heating. While the author does not mentions how many p...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 377, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'mention'
Suggestion: mention
... for heating. While the author does not mentions how many people bought these appliance...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 408, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...does not mentions how many people bought these appliances.Due to the stability of...
^^
Line 5, column 427, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Due
...ow many people bought these appliances.Due to the stability of home appliances lik...
^^^
Line 5, column 479, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , maybe
...tability of home appliances like fridges,maybe there are few people will change their ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 556, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...ge their appliances in well conditions. Whats more, the new technology of inslation a...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: needn't
...at the author suggests that the company neednt build new plants given the power genera...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 28.8173652695 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 55.5748502994 97% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2321.0 2260.96107784 103% => OK
No of words: 463.0 441.139720559 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01295896328 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69507132477 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 204.123752495 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479481641469 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 723.6 705.55239521 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.257197296 57.8364921388 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.529411765 119.503703932 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2352941176 23.324526521 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 5.70786347227 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.25449101796 362% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115083703345 0.218282227539 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437791082686 0.0743258471296 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318039310362 0.0701772020484 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623720411605 0.128457276422 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327087174675 0.0628817314937 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.3799401198 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.3550499002 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.197005988 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 98.500998004 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.