do you agree or disagree with the following statement: the university will spend money on dormitory to improve the life quality of students, which of the following do you thin is the best way? providing a room for quiet study; building an exercise room; prividing entertainment place(watch film)
It's a good idea that the university will plan to rebuild the dormitory which can improve the life quality of students. With the three choices given, to me, an exercise room is more favorable than the other two plans. Because the other two rooms could be realized better in other ways while the exercise room would benefit the students most. I will address my view there in after.
First of all, in my opinion, doing gyms is the best way for young people to stay away from the disease which would drag ones' study. And the more important merit is that we can relax our nerve which was deeply consumption in studying. Once I was preparing the final exam just two days later, I still remembered the nights when I was learning, it was a struggle against sleepy eyes. Then I decided to put away the books made me sleeping and went out to run. Had been jogging for 50 minutes, I was on myself again. Then the second half of the study that night began. In the end, I passed that exam. Thus if I want to concentrate on studying, I will have no hesitation to keep on exercising. It would be fantastic if there is an exercise room which can do gyms conveniently just downstairs my living room.
Secondly, an exercise room would be a fabulous place to play with friends. Especially for these indoor sports. As a Chinese, table tennis is the making friend's policy of mine. Once at my University in China, when I was playing table tennis with my friends in the stadium, several foreign teachers were interested in the pads in our hands and ball on the table. Then I found their fascination and invited them to play. Then we made good friends with each other as I approached them who were the best foreign players I had ever met, and truly these words worked.
Finally, the quiet study room and entertainment room are all available choices while as for me they are not the best one. On one hand, the quiet study rooms are available for students in the teaching building of the university, thus it would not be necessary to build another one in the dormitory. On the other hand, the entertainments are varied in different ways, some people like me do not want to stay indoors all the day and the sunlight and beaches are my choices which favored by many people. Also, I believe the dormitory is the place for students to study and rest which could not emphasize the feature of the entertainment. Because it would disturb the students' studying.
In all, I totally agree with this excellent policy that the university will spend money on students' dormitory. Compared with the three choices of rebuilding rooms, I believe that an exercise room would be most favorable than the other two rooms as it is more practical in use which could benefit most of the students in the dormitory. All the students would benefit from doing gyms which could keep healthy and relax.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It's; It is
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ore favorable than the other two plans. Because the other two rooms could be realized b...
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Suggestion: Thus,
... began. In the end, I passed that exam. Thus if I want to concentrate on studying, I...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...asize the feature of the entertainment. Because it would disturb the students studying....
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...that the university will spend money on students dormitory. Compared with the three choi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, while, as for, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2348.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 513.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57699805068 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41879778101 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463937621832 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 719.1 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9428254788 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.962962963 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.74074074074 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275752857991 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711098729955 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668204382688 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162837333671 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520371269567 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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