On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
* describe the item you lost
* explain how you lost it
* tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
Hope you are doing well! My name is John and I am inscribing this missive regarding the loss of my personal laptop during my recent holiday to Goa. Last week, I was on vacation and had travelled to Goa with my family. During the vacation, I was also carrying my personal laptop to check my emails and have access to my lovely memories in the form of photos and videos. I had a wonderful vacation to Goa but eventually, it turned out to be terrible when I realized that I had lost my precious and personal laptop. On the last day of my holidays, when I had just boarded the flight I quickly realized that I do not have my laptop bag with me. I immediately called the hotel to check if I have forgotten it in the hotel room but the hotel reception apprised that the room service have diligently checked and unfortunately failed to discover it. I also contacted the cab services company but they have been unable to find it either.
Finally, I would request you to assist me in recovering the cost of the laptop which is covered under the travel insurance I had rightfully purchased as a component of my holiday package. Please request for any information which is essential to expedite the process. Looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Regards,
John
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53846153846 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5988106767 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568376068376 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.9 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1798669995 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.2 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120236125688 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455565036072 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497153631563 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114551996592 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435051935672 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.