Integrated essay suggested in TPO16
In this set of material the topic of problem faced with science of archeology is discussed. The lecturer relates to this topic by adding the information about guidelines suggested by Britain government pertaining to improvement of mentioned problem.
At first, the lecturer explained that most of construction project should examine by archeological experts, then, they should embark on measurements in order to preserving the artifacts. According to this guideline, they should examine before any excavating or digging on which many valuable artifacts will save from constructing during various projects. This will be a solution for a problem which is put forward in the text on which foundation for new building threatens sites.
Moreover, the lecturer states that according to guideline many archeological projects support by construction companies not by government. This will compensate the reduction of budget for science projects. This measurement improve the problem suggested to what is written is text that many archeologist felt that the financial support for archeological research was inadequate.
Finally, according to lecturer, lots of paid works for archeology guarantee on the basis of new guideline. On this basis, experts in this science need to present in all stages, from processing all data, to writing report. Therefore, finding job for archeologists will guarantee. This also remove and improve the situation stated in the text on which archeologist have to work just in universities or a few government agencies.
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in order to preserving the artifacts.
in order to preserve the artifacts.
Sentence: This measurement improve the problem suggested to what is written is text that many archeologist felt that the financial support for archeological research was inadequate.
Description: The fragment measurement improve the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace improve with verb, past tense
flaws:
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.045 0.07
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 12
No. of Words: 234 250
No. of Characters: 1278 1200
No. of Different Words: 128 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.911 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.462 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.045 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 101 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 88 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.937 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.417 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.342 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.59 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.045 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4