The graph below shows electricity production (in terawatt hours) in France between!1980 and 2012

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The graph below shows electricity production (in terawatt hours) in France between!
1980 and 2012

The line graph compares the amount of electricity produced in France using four different sources
of power over a period of 32 years. ! !
It is clear that nuclear power was by far the most important means of electricity generation over the
period shown. Renewables provided the lowest amount of electricity in each year. ! !
In 1980, thermal power stations were the main source of electricity in France, generating around
120 terawatt hours of power. Nuclear and hydroelectric power stations produced just under 75
terawatt hours of electricity each, and renewables provided a negligible amount. Just one year
later, nuclear power overtook thermal power as the primary source of electricity. ! !
Between 1980 and 2005, electricity production from nuclear power rose dramatically to a peak of
430 terawatt hours. By contrast, the figure for thermal power fell to only 50 terawatt hours in 1985,
and remained at this level for the rest of the period. Hydroelectric power generation remained
relatively stable, at between 50 and 80 terawatt hours, for the whole 32-year period, but renewable
electricity production saw only a small rise to approximately 25 terawatt hours by 2012. ! !

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44086021505 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93602745228 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2163019406 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.444444444 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 5.23603664747 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 13.0 3.83414634146 339% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272936605197 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110881563122 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870175753735 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10391717578 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864164522893 0.0819641961636 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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