The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009.

Essay topics:

The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009.

The given charts compare the percentages of traveling reasons and give information about the main issues of America public travelers in 2009.
A glance at the bar chart shows a significant proportion of America citizens’ travel demand, which is for workplace movements. We can also see that the price of travel is the most American's concerned issue for public travel.
According to the bar chart in the year of 2009, the commute reason witnesses the highest percent, about 49%, while only 6% is the purpose of visiting friends and relatives. The other factors contribute 45% of the given bar chart, include personal, shopping, social, and recreation activities.
Looking more closely at the pie chart, it is immediately obvious that the problem with the traveling price accounted for a large proportion of 36%, which was about 6 times more than in the space for pedestrians as well as in access to public transport. The percent of the safety concerns, aggressive drivers and highway congestion was roughly similar, 19%, 17%, and 14%, respectively.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18713450292 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8228718931 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637426900585 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9863201976 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.714285714 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44654459554 0.215688989381 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191073040481 0.103423049105 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145239306428 0.0843802449381 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269903353536 0.15604864568 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142092426073 0.0819641961636 173% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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