The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009.

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The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009.

The provided bar chart and pie chart give the information about why Americans travel and the main problems for travel in 2009.
Overall, <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-0008364CD864CA287B1372AE3460F9A9" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1091" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="it is clear that " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">it is clear that&nbsp;</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-0D9DC2C27ADAF1C40B84AA5F21CCC51D" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="I commuted the main reason for Americans to travel in 2009~they commuted the main reason for Americans to travel in 2009~it commuted the main reason for Americans to travel in 2009~we commuted the main reason for Americans to travel in 2009" data-pwa-dictionary-word="the main reason for Americans to travel in 2009 was commuted" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">the main reason for Americans to travel in 2009&nbsp;</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-0D9DC2C27ADAF1C40B84AA5F21CCC51D" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="I commuted the main reason for Americans to travel in 2009~they commuted the main reason for Americans to travel in 2009~it commuted the main reason for Americans to travel in 2009~we commuted the main reason for Americans to travel in 2009" data-pwa-dictionary-word="the main reason for Americans to travel in 2009 was commuted" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">was commuted</pwa> to and from work, while the concern problem was the cost of travelling.
In 2009, 49% of travel reasons for American was to commuting to and from work. In contrast, 6% of trips was for visiting peers and family members and one out of ten people <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-D9CC0FD8E441F2D674A2F0FD98CC22C8" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_835" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="choose to " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">choose to&nbsp;</pwa>travel for their personal reasons while shopping come in the third reason <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-5E849F4A7E7C752404CBD037930EABC7" data-pwa-rule-id="CRFSR_LIST_35" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible confused word" data-pwa-suggestions="lit" data-pwa-dictionary-word="list" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">list</pwa> by 16%. <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-91D4BA545AC478D077CF07E8410B1491" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="I recorded social and recreation~They recorded social and recreation~We recorded social and recreation" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Social and recreation was recorded" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">Social and recreation&nbsp;</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-91D4BA545AC478D077CF07E8410B1491" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="I recorded social and recreation~They recorded social and recreation~We recorded social and recreation" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Social and recreation was recorded" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">was recorded</pwa> almost <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-B784270900BA69A10F4EADFB11787055" data-pwa-rule-id="CRFSR_FIFTH_18" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible confused word" data-pwa-suggestions="fifty" data-pwa-dictionary-word="fifth" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">fifth</pwa> for reasons of travel.
Through the <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-8BFED4D0DA828B187D40E715B519D343" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_539" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="given " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">given&nbsp;</pwa>year, the pie <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-DE9C9237B36A42E618BB6413FFF8A7D4" data-pwa-rule-id="MISSING_WORD_4" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible missing word" data-pwa-suggestions="chart to" data-pwa-dictionary-word="chart" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">chart</pwa> show that the cost of travel was the main problem for the United <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-D2E416BA136B97654D0CB2DE83405615" data-pwa-rule-id="EXTRA_SPACE" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Remove extra space" data-pwa-suggestions="States resident" data-pwa-dictionary-word="States resident" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">States resident</pwa> and it was 36% while the safety concerns was 19%. Aggressive drivers and Highway congestion were the third important issues for people who <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-B722088B4333B58A794228B479AFDA48" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_835" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="choose to " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">choose to&nbsp;</pwa>travel public 17% and 14% respectively. Finally, access to public transport and space for pedestrians <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-085B59EC1CE2FB77789EAE479264431D" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-dictionary-word="were considered" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">were considered</pwa> the lowest important issues for Americans in 2009.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, so, third, while, as for, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 7.0 300% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 6.8 279% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 33.7804878049 166% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 6037.0 965.302439024 625% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 524.0 196.424390244 267% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 11.5209923664 4.92477711251 234% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.7844588288 3.73543355544 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 13.4142016876 2.65546596893 505% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 187.0 106.607317073 175% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.356870229008 0.547539520022 65% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1598.4 283.868780488 563% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 3.1 1.45097560976 214% => Avg_syllables_per_word is high.

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 307.09757908 43.030603864 714% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 464.384615385 112.824112599 412% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.3076923077 22.9334400587 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0821241085483 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116382493811 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142907286982 0.0843802449381 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158756466509 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146671870137 0.0819641961636 179% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 53.0 13.2329268293 401% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -96.02 61.2550243902 -157% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 22.1 6.51609756098 339% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.6 10.3012195122 355% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 50.42 11.4140731707 442% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 40.7170731707 280% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 23.5 11.4329268293 206% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 11.0658536585 217% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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