Nowadays many people work part or full time from home. Some people say that working from home has many benefits while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people are of the belief that manipulate the work from home has its merits while <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-72DF3508F071C6085EA9A8E6B7D54093" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="I argue others~they argue others~we argue others~it argues others" data-pwa-dictionary-word="others are argued" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">others </pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-72DF3508F071C6085EA9A8E6B7D54093" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="I argue others~they argue others~we argue others~it argues others" data-pwa-dictionary-word="others are argued" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">are argued</pwa> that it leads them to miss cooperation between workers. <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-5D4568B1752C27B5F3907F6EF1377896" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="I will present both sides of arguments and my opinion~We will present both sides of arguments and my opinion" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Both sides of arguments and my opinion will be presented" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">Both sides of arguments and my opinion </pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-5D4568B1752C27B5F3907F6EF1377896" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="I will present both sides of arguments and my opinion~We will present both sides of arguments and my opinion" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Both sides of arguments and my opinion will be presented" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">will be presented</pwa> in the following lines.
On one hand, a plethora of people are of the <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-EA0156DA5FDAA3A0957BF3461373BDA7" data-pwa-rule-id="CRFSR_BELIEF_14" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible confused word" data-pwa-suggestions="belief" data-pwa-dictionary-word="believe" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">believe</pwa> that doing jobs from home will be <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-C38D6FFBAB0763741DE678E34499BB5F" data-pwa-rule-id="DET_CG_2" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible missing determiner" data-pwa-suggestions="a benefit~the benefit" data-pwa-dictionary-word="benefit" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">benefit</pwa>. This is because saving time consider one of the most important element in modern societies. In other word, reducing the wasting time which <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-79E531596D2EADA7742AA2E4B0110773" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-dictionary-word="is spent" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">is</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-79E531596D2EADA7742AA2E4B0110773" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-dictionary-word="is spent" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> spent</pwa> before and after work <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-0692D31B93E35B8A7CF1C9A79606DD9F" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_3_1768" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: because of, for" data-pwa-suggestions="because of~for" data-pwa-dictionary-word="due to" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">due to</pwa> traffic congestion and accidents will help them <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-7D9F896A3C9841A66CE5F5CB13CC803C" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2851" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="This 'to' is not required" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="to " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">to </pwa>produce a better performance in their work. A prime example, Freelancers who are working wherever they want, and have <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-3865C9C6CC1A88F2863C3AE5536E4A32" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: flexiable" data-pwa-suggestions="flexible" data-pwa-dictionary-word="flexiable" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">flexiable</pwa> hours to choose from are becoming <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-CC3827115B66FF07745B935D809503CC" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: haighly" data-pwa-suggestions="highly" data-pwa-dictionary-word="haighly" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">haighly</pwa> requested from employers. Hence, control projects and tasks from home have become preferable for both workers and <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-525BD16F4E6E2D5763E9DC3A23229C29" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: compaines" data-pwa-suggestions="companies~complines" data-pwa-dictionary-word="compaines" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">compaines</pwa>.
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-E342E8792DD89E2D6794C720D00FCA2B" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_377" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: Who" data-pwa-suggestions="Who" data-pwa-dictionary-word="On the other hand, who" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">On the other hand, who</pwa> think <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-310B413023C87219A47B1BE169A3D4F1" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2834" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="The word 'that' can often be omitted here" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="that " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">that </pwa>working from offices would be better than homes have their reasons. The main reason is keep the atmosphere of cooperation with workers help many <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-7B4E4271F0F68FC098DC6BDE46C744DF" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: compaines" data-pwa-suggestions="companies" data-pwa-dictionary-word="compaines" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">compaines</pwa> to grow and achieve their targets. <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-AD19E3401ECD6076BC02D87483733206" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_795" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: Second" data-pwa-suggestions="Second" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Secondly" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">Secondly</pwa>, employees who <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-A851EA9CDAC67B4B04CD398C9F256CDD" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Possible spelling error: commited" data-pwa-suggestions="committed" data-pwa-dictionary-word="commited" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">commited</pwa> to work in the same place are <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-62BAC1A6974F582AC3B2972316089073" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: likley" data-pwa-suggestions="likely~local~largely~likelier~legal" data-pwa-dictionary-word="likley" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">likley</pwa> to being <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-11BFC9E68E1A14A49DA2C022D863A7B6" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: motiveted" data-pwa-suggestions="motivated" data-pwa-dictionary-word="motiveted" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">motiveted</pwa> with each <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-43B414354EF8271AAA106BD01C0D49E0" data-pwa-rule-id="GR_21" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Each other is singular so the possesive form is should be 's" data-pwa-suggestions="other's" data-pwa-dictionary-word="others" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">others</pwa> and produce the better of them. However, if they finish these tasks from their home, they will miss this kind of <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-A15A1CE4E0E6EAAFD2B10352B1E09295" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: creativety" data-pwa-suggestions="creativity" data-pwa-dictionary-word="creativety" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">creativety</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-CF3F8BFC4EC6D706D12A2026201E9266" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_609" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word=" as well" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> as well</pwa>. The last survey approved by Cambridge shown that 57% of workers who working together in the same area are likely to achieve the <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-5D60F807BD4D1CCADA0F9404D988BE6E" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: compaines" data-pwa-suggestions="companies" data-pwa-dictionary-word="compaines" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">compaines</pwa> goals than who make it from home.
In <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-4D6724DAD24736110D137441DA29B5BC" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: conslusion" data-pwa-suggestions="conclusion~consolation~conciliation~cancellation" data-pwa-dictionary-word="conslusion" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">conslusion</pwa>, although <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-5753CD4BEF8713770BDA60333AFEDE54" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1592" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="the fact " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">the fact </pwa>that working from offices would be effective, I highly recommended that who are finishing their projects and work from homes to continue on saving their time which is the most valuable <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-DBCF21627B41FF7B5FF2D0DFD5E275D3" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: sourse" data-pwa-suggestions="source~course" data-pwa-dictionary-word="sourse" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">sourse</pwa> in the modern world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 2962, Rule ID: IS_SHOULD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...other is singular so the possesive form is should be s' data-pwa-suggestions=...
^^
Line 7, column 1316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...apos;>sourse in the modern world.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 13.1623246493 251% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 55.0 24.0651302605 229% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 11017.0 1615.20841683 682% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 755.0 315.596192385 239% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 14.5920529801 5.12529762239 285% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 5.24187593597 4.20363070211 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 16.1425221118 2.80592935109 575% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 330.0 176.041082164 187% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.437086092715 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 2880.0 506.74238477 568% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 3.8 1.60771543086 236% => Avg_syllables_per_word is high.
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 420.125703389 49.4020404114 850% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 579.842105263 106.682146367 544% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.7368421053 20.7667163134 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.02052501622 0.244688304435 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0226672944558 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0195124854976 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.022353220697 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131360068837 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 67.2 13.0946893788 513% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -154.23 50.2224549098 -307% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 23.7 7.44779559118 318% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 44.5 11.3001002004 394% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 67.93 12.4159519038 547% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 218.0 78.4519038076 278% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 68.0 10.7795591182 631% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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