In towns and cities,shopping malls should replace the small shops. Di you agree or disagree.
The world is expanding at very fast pace. The old thongs change into new ways. Shopping malls become a debatable concept of controversial from which the sustainable influence whether it replace the small shops has sparked the controversy over the potential of the people perceptions. The following paragraphs illustrate the fact about this notion.
To inititate with, there are myriad reasons why the trends is changed. Firstly, shopping malls are most conscious one lies in the fact that it influence the single platform under one roof with varieties of products. Moreover, it is a place where people find the better facilities like parking, as a paradigm ,in small shops people have no place to hold their vehicle as a consequence traffic is increased,but this trend is changed in shopping malls.
At the out set, small shops, also have its own feign which is the prominent form to change the lifestyle of people. Firstly, every person in the society is affordable and friendly with local shops, because it is the cheaper mode. However, it is the only source of a person for coining money, if it is snatched from them it result as a dig hole in the shopkeeper pocket.
To conclude,it can be said taht even the trend of shopping malls is emerging but the value of small shops is in stabled form according to my perspective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87665198238 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66230957157 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612334801762 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2020093658 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.636363636 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184214231317 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543873681701 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602472980324 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110152584307 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296875704936 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 82.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 74.5 Out of 90
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